First Trailer Draft

This is the first draft for my film trailer. I think that this can be improved a lot to make it better. It will be more affective if I add music to the background of it and it will make it more dramatic. It also isn't long enough meaning I need to record a lot more clips in order to make it a a good length trailer. I also feel that the intertitles can be improved to make it better for my target audience.