Josh Perryman Blog Feedback October 2014
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Task
Research and Planning
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Incomplete/ Limited
0-7 marks
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Basic
8-11 marks
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Proficient
12-15 marks
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Excellent
16-20 marks
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Existing Products Research
1/movie
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ü
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Existing Products Research
2/movie
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ü
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Existing Products Research/
Print (Thinglink)
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ü
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Narrative theorists research
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ü
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Representation. Additional
Theory
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ü
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Outline ideas (mindmaps)
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ü
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Film pitch ideas
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ü
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Audience feedback on idea SL
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ü
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Character Profiles
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ü
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Treatment for final idea
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ü
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WWW:
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analysis of existing media texts is good and you show and awareness of
denotations in all instances. You now need to consider why media producers
have made the choices they have and make clear links to key concepts.
ü You
have an awareness of key concepts.
ü You
begin to show an awareness of genre and your research is informed.
ü You
are able to identify generic conventions and comment confidently on how they
are used to appeal to audience.
ü You
use a range of technologies on your blog.
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EBI:
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You need to complete all tasks in full. There
is only one audience feedback audio on your blog. You were asked to do three.
This is effectively a persistent failure to meet a deadline that was set a
long time ago now. Add these to
your blog before next lesson.
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You have the ability to attain proficient, if
not excellent results, in this module if you apply yourself Josh. Complete
all tasks to the best of your ability.
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When adding video – edit files to show off
your skills.
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You need to add descriptions to your blog
pots. Do they make sense to someone you have never met?
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Pupil Comment:
I’m happy with the marks I have been given, but I feel that I can
improve them. If I do the ‘EBI’ I will be able to get the B I want, I will
also have improve and add more detail to much of my work to secure the B.
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