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Task Research and Planning Part 2	Incomplete/ Limited 0-7 marks		Basic 8-11 marks		Proficient 12-15 marks		Excellent 16-20 marks
Key scenes	In Proficient
Key Scene script						ü
Prop List					ü
Locations							ü
Filming key scenes					ü
Film logo ideas							ü
Audience feedback on logo ideas							ü
Shot list					ü
Production company logo ideas							ü
Audience feedback on logo ideas							ü
WWW: ü  Key scene 3 shows real strength: you begin to experiment with editing; exploring more interesting narrative perspective/ audience positioning. ü  Well done for conducting some independent and innovative additions to the spreadsheet to develop your research and planning. ü  You have started to take photos and add them to some posts to enhance your ideas and demonstrate technical skill. ü  You are continuing to use a range of technologies on your blog.
EBI: ·       Add a description or brief explanation to each blog post – eventually this will be seen by an external moderator will a close up of Jack under a subheading make sense to them? They won’t know you, your group or your circumstances so you need to make this explicit. ·       Key scene 1 and 2 don’t appear to be key at the moment. Are these scenes really the most important/ captivating narrative that your film offers? You need to develop/ improve these. (Why are these different on Max’s blog? Can you share these?) ·       Work needs to be done on your shot list for your trailer – just 10 shots? ·       Try to proof read blog posts to correct basic SPaG errors
Pupil Comment: To make my work at least a B standard, I will need to do all the EBI. I will need to make sure that I keep my work consistent. I need to make my key scenes better as I thought they were only for my trailer, I will now take one of the key scenes out and replace it with a murder scene. This will make my key scenes an excellent hopefully.